Starfletchers New Offficial Builder Application

First things first I would like to apoligise for my last post, it wasn't very accurate and it didn't have much in, so I would like to redo it with some accurate Information.

IGN: Starfletcher
Age: 15
Building Skill: 7/10

Building Skills:
Basic Redstone
Simple Pixel Art
Time Lapses
Signs
Skybases
Castles
And Basic underground raid bases.

Maturity: 8
Why I want to become a builder: Building is my passion, I would like to take it to the next level.

Activity: 9, I play 2 hours everyday.

Twitter: @clan_gaming
Skype: Non
House: Griffindor
Year: 1
- Starfletcher, I hope my post has inspired you!  

I also have a few friends that might be able to help me as well as a few Builders.
I have built many builds in the past!

You can find some of mine and my friends build at my twitter page @clan_gaming, only used to show my building experience!
- Starfletcher

Then I choose Teacher.

Hmmm.... Would I be accepted and is my application any good Merlin?

Thankyou!